Hazel cosmetics

Hazel cosmetics presentation final

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 Assessment of the presentation
As I already announced yesterday, I had to give a presentation today. I have to say that I was not as nervous I thought I would be. I think I was well prepaired and therefore conscious about my expression.
After giving the presentation our English teacher assessed our presentation. He really liked our Mission Statement. He said it looked like it should look like. Of course, we were proud of that. Furthermore, he appreciated our idea of the new product for Hazel : The self - tanning depilator creme.
Nevertheless, he also provided us with some helpful suggestions. According to that, we forgot to add figures to our pie charts, we should keep that in mind for the next time. Moreover, our advertisement part was too overloaded, we should keep it shorter and unfortunately we forgot to think about a name for our product.